dijous, 1 de març del 2012

Formal letter

C/Empori nº15
Sant Pere Pescador, Girona
Spain    17470
12th December 2011
The Principal
IES Castelló d'Empúries
C/Rentador    nº6
Castelló d'Empúries
Girona, Spain    17486

Dear Mrs Lluïsa Pintó,
I am writing this letter to you because of the situation of this high school, IES Castelló d'Empúries. 
In this high school there are a lot of good points  but there are also bad points. On the one hand, I am going to tell you about the teachers. The organitzation and the department of Education are very good and very organized. I just want you to know that some teachers are very good but some ones are a little bit strict with us and very cold persons. I know that they only have to teach us and go home, but sometimes you learn more doing funny classes and not boring. 
On the other hand, there are some things that me and my friends would like to change if we could, for example the colours of the clases and the corridors. They are very dull and boring. If we have to be with the moral on the top, and with these colours it is very difficult to be consentrated.
In my opinion, musicals, excursions and trips of the school are good and I give the school a lot of points to do that because we forget the routine, we have fun and we learn a lot without books, too. But I also disagree with these excursions because we have to be a lot of people and sometimes it doesn't give us any opportunities to learn about something different.
I will be interested to know your opinion of this letter. 

Yours sincerely,

               Eva Saló.

1 comentari:

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